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I do believe this should be two different songs.

However, great audio project over all

great song

This is what I feel when I hear this:

After a long war in the night, the sun rises to show the survivors and your side is victorious. Glory and pain greets you as the sun's rays shines on to the battle field.

OR

The morning is early. To continue your journey you jump on your steed and ride into the dawn to explore the land further.

great song

For some odd reason this reminded me a bit of Never Ending Sotry.

I really liked it. It's weird, you really described the song well.

Short but interesting

I love the dramatic music that oyu just whipped out during midnight XD

I'd love to learn how do such things =)

very well done

This isn't the typically remix that are just made techno...

I believe you have jut brought back the meaning of a remix, to manipulate it, not just to make it into techno...

very well done.

I'm sorry to be blunt

The vocals need some work done...
I know you're working on it though...

I love the general song though, however, the vocals somehow ruined it for me.

Setu-Firestorm responds:

There's no problem with being blunt.

When I listen back to the song, I feel that one reason the vocals sounded not-too-good was because I sang at a lower octave than one would expect for a song in D. And when I sang in that octave, I wasn't doing the correct throat exercise to project the right sound.

That's probably (my speculation, anyway) why the vocals sounded that way.

you could do better with it

I believe the ending is really Fort Minor likeJaymeBaka711 said...although I believe it is an actual classical piece that Fort Minor used on their own...

The random scratching and the weird mix in of that song kind of ruined the piece.

soothing

I don't know what the other reviewers were talking about. I believe this is because they don't quite understand non upbeat music. Of course there's not going to much happening. It's not made to give a heart attack or keep changing...it's to sooth and calm oneself.

I believe the general idea of your ambient song was good, and there was that soothing feeling to it.

Here is some advice I have to improve it.
1) It sounds good, but needs more variation
2) even with variation don't forget to go back to the main sequence
3) the title of the song may need some changing

Hope this helped.

SinZLazTWordZ responds:

Oh trust me it will change =]

Excellent work

Excellent work. I just want to go to a club and jump around now.

I would change the genre for this though.

This is indeed upbeat and makes my heart try to beat out of my chest cavity because it is so pumped!

However, it isn't something that I would dance to because of certain parts to it.

This song has fluctuations on the emotional aspect of it, so I believe it would fit in trance.

XtremeSounds responds:

thanks for the review. i think you might be right to be honest, i wasnt sure what category to put it in.

decent work

Good job on this piece.

yet...I have a few things to say.

I didn't really see the connection between the title and the song...
I would switch the song name to something else.

Also, it needs to be more upbeat to be dance music...you can't really dance to it as of now...

but I bet you could imporve on this!

FairSquare responds:

i changed the title :P
Also, i suck at making tracks better. Once i finished a song i don't really like to go back and work on it again, so i'll let this song for what it is.
I'll probably delete this song within a week or so, because i don't really like it myself.
You should take a look at my previous song. It's way better :P

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