Brotos's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[I'm The Alpha & Omega [Final]]

I am the...excited man!

Very well put together.

Each section was not repeated too much to bore the listener, but not too short to become an uncomfortable jump.

And of course, great job in coming back to the main music beat...so often musicians forget this essential thing...THERE IS ALWAYS A MAIN PART and you repeat this part within different sections.

well done.

[Freaky Style]

good

It reminds me of an old school girl group...

It's not a soothing song, but not an extremely energetic song. It's something you could listen anytime.

This would good as an intro to something like a movie, or a small background bit, but not a song by itself.

[The 80's]

Pump it up!

Excellent usage of voice to introduce a rising in the energy.
This a really brilliant piece of work, it really gets me pumped up.

Here is just one thing I noticed.
at such places as :47 an :56 there are some awkward short breaks sounding like you restarted a loop of a certain beat/sound sequence.

They are subtle, not noticeable to a non trained ear. But as someone like yourself I think you have noticed that...as of now the song is great, but maybe you could make a little more smoot.

Mike52118 responds:

Thanks for your info! yes i noticed the loops, unfortunately, with the program i have at the moment there is nothing i can do to change this.

[[\Under the Night Sky - Mac9/]]

well done my friend

This song is a very great masterpiece. I commend you as semi-pro pianist (unfortunately I don't plan on doing anything with it, I realized I don't like playing in front of a crowd all the time...). But it doesn't sound amateur (you had variation with in your music)

However, I do have one bit of advice for it.

The windish instrument that comes in early in the piece needs to be worked on.
It gives a fuzzy sound and gives off an always changing pitch/volume that is a bit disturbing/not nice to the ear. If this can be fixed, I believe this song would be perfect. Maybe it's because it's a computerized instrument, but some other instrument needs to take it's place.

paradoxphenomena responds:

Thanks for the review Brotos. Yes I know some of the samples used in this piece could have been better and in hindsight it was a bad judgment call on my part but overall what you get out this song is the what I was aiming at with this piece.

[Elweed - Sunrise S.H]

getting there

Well, to me it kind of sounds like you need some more experience with this.

Some areas sound as though there are too many instruments and others too little.

However, the voice was soothing/nice and I can tell you put work into it.
I can't give you any advice, but I hope you will keep improving...

and maybe upload a new version of this.